this week for reading I have made a Rhyming poem to show my learning. our goal this week is selects words or phrases to enhance meaning and/or mood confidently shape ideas for effect her is my poem
do you like my poem ?
I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Lewis
ReplyDeleteThat is a wonderful poem. Anything to do with dogs always catches my eye. That's pretty much what all puppies are like. It will keep you busy filling in the holes. That puppies going to miss you when you go back to school.
Steve