This term for s.u.w I have been writing a store here is one of my paragraphs from my store
It was a lonely pitch black night and I heard a knock on the door I did not know what it was so I looked around but it was definitely the door so I looked outside of the door and I sore a mail man with a big big box but I told the mailman that is no my box but he said it
Was your address. The mailman told me it was so so so heavy as he was bring it in to my house and up the stairs . I was thinking to myself what it was before I opened it the box was so so so tall to so I grabbed the door handle and open it and I sore the mail man he had not left yet so I showed he the door. So I opened it and it was a blanket oh there is something behind blanket and I sore a robot that looked like iron man suit but it had a note and it said to iron man I hope that you have got the new and improved iron man suit you can make any improves you want from the hero team PS your first mission will be in you gmail. At that moment I thought to myself what am I going to with this a million thought came to my mind I could go flying with it or shoot flames out to the canons in the hand.
how would you finish the story?
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