This week for writing we have been writing about how technology work.Here is my Explanation writing what do you think about my writing and do you think that I can Change something to make my Explanation writing a bit better ?
Emperors clothing
Our challenge was that all of our clothes were lost and all we could find was 12 sheets of new of new paper and 10 meters of tape and a pair of scissors so we had to make some clothes of all of the materials provided. We talk about what formal clothes are we all were a bit confused about what formal clothes were but then we started thinking and we came up with some ideas. We thought that formal clothes are.
Firstly we decided to make a jacket first for the jacket we started to lay the news paper out in the shape of a top secondly we add more new paper on the sides of the top to make it into a long sleeve top lastly we we coped the long sleeve top to the other side and taped them together.
After that Elise had the idea to make some pants the first thing we did was lay the new paper in the shape of pants and secondly we copied it to the other side lastly we taped it all together.
lastly we mad hats they were easy to make all we had to do was get a bit of newspaper and tap it around my head now all of our Emperors Clothing is done.
Explanation writing
This week for writing we have been writing about how something works and that is could Explanation writing. here is my Explanation writing what do you think about my writing and do you think that I can Change something to make my Explanation writing a bit better ?
Our challenge was that all of our clothes were lost and all we could find was 12 sheets of new of new paper and 10 meters of tape and a pair of scissors so we had to make some clothes of all of the materials provided. We talk about what formal clothes are we all were a bit confused about what formal clothes were but then we started thinking and we came up with some ideas. We thought that formal clothes are.
Firstly we decided to make a jacket first for the jacket we started to lay the news paper out in the shape of a top secondly we add more new paper on the sides of the top to make it into a long sleeve top lastly we we coped the long sleeve top to the other side and taped them together.
After that Elise had the idea to make some pants the first thing we did was lay the new paper in the shape of pants and secondly we copied it to the other side lastly we taped it all together.
lastly we mad hats they were easy to make all we had to do was get a bit of newspaper and tap it around my head now all of our Emperors Clothing is done.
Explanation writing
This week for writing we have been writing about how something works and that is could Explanation writing. here is my Explanation writing what do you think about my writing and do you think that I can Change something to make my Explanation writing a bit better ?
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